Nowadays people have greater access to fast food Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, the trend for
junk
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cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
have
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sharply increased.Even in smaller cities or
villages
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people
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got options to purchase
these kind
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this kind
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of foods more
oftenlly
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often
.Quicker
avaliability
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availability
and affordability are the major two reasons
of
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consuming fast have numerous benefits, despite
of
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few
conceners
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concerns
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which deteriorate the human health.In
upcomming
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upcoming
paragraphs,
i
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will discuss in
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why fast
food
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have greater
benfits
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benefits
than its harm.
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, most of us have got hectic
schedule
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nowadays.So there is nothing unlit now
avialable
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available
which can beat the
spped
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speed
and
affordabilty
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affordability
of
junk
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food
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.To meet the daily
work related
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targets,individuals go through stress and shortage of
time
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as well.So that
people
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can improve the productivity of their work,they do not bother to spend hours
to cook
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authentic meals when they have alternative options.
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,a survey was conducted by Unitec University,London revealed that 70% of the local public visit Mcdonals and Kfc due to their
quicker
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processing
time
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and
resonable
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reasonable
prices.
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,
majority
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of
people
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utilise their saved
time
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by doing
exersies
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exercises
exercise
on
aregular
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a regular
regular
basis.Even the
food
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ingredients and spices used at home to cook the
food
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are too
expinsve
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expensive
and
also
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take a lot of
efforts
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.
However
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,
Junk
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cusines
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cuisine
cuisines
are unhealthy for every age group.
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,these
kind
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kinds
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food
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of food
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products are made from
perserved
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preserved
and
processeed
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processed
ingredients which can be
toxicated
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intoxicated
to
consumer's
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body.To save
the
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time
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,humans are getting
to
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addicted to it.
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, World Health Organisation reports in 2018 reports that 6 out of 10
people
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died
with
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obesity and heart attack .
Junk
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cusines
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cuisine
are responsible for
such
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kind
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kinds
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of illness.As many of us are doing sitting jobs but eating heavy and fatty meats just because meat burgers are
aviaiable
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available
to buy as low as $1 each.
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,due to lack of
nuturious
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nutritious
values in daily meals
people
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are
also
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suffering from depression and social anxiety too. In conclusion,
although
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there few
concering
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concerning
outcomes are
arsining
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arising
from the heavy demand of
junk
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food
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,yet
i
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believe to compete with day to day busy schedule ,fast
food
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is one of the best alternative cusine.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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