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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Many
businesses
 hire new
employees
 every year as per their need and growth and sometimes due to
employees
 taking up new jobs at another business. Some
businesses
 find a lack of basic
skills
such
 as interpersonal and communication
skills
 in freshers which is unwelcomed by existing people in the company
furthermore
, it escalates into serious issues at the workplace in certain situations.
this
 essay will discuss its causes and try to provide simple solutions.
Firstly
, the causes of
this
 kind of lack of interpersonal
skills
 are rooted in schooling, parenting, and not to mention
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social environment. Parents often overlook the behaviour and choice of words of their child when it comes to for asking help or even a normal conversation. Eventually, it leads them to become rude in behaviour as well as with careless attitude towards everyone around them. When these kids grow up and start working in an industry they are often seen to be lacking some professional manners and
consequently
 lacking communication
skills
.
In addition
 to that, schools are often overlooked the vital role of the development of these
skills
 at a younger age to make them survive in the real world.
For example
, many new
employees
 fail to write an email in a professional way to their superiors.
Finally
, there are some solutions
businesses
 can take advantage of and provide their
employees
 with the armour of these
skills
 in a short period of time,
such
 as personality development advisors. It is a common sight in many
businesses
 to take help from
such
 experts and it has delivered promising results for most of them. To conclude, a Lack of interpersonal
skills
 can be dealt with by providing proper training through outsourced experts and some vital steps can be taken to equip school students with these
skills
.
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