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Dear Stephan,  I am excited to join your organization as a Software Developer.

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, I am writing to inform you that I can not make it on the arranged date. I was supposed to join the team on September 10, but something came up. Currently, I am on my vacation in Iceland, and my return flight to New York was cancelled because a volcano had erupted. As you might have heard from the latest news, the volcanic eruption started approximately 50 kilometres from the country’s capital city, Reykjavik, where I am now. I am safe, hardly do lava flows pose an immediate threat to people, but unfortunately, all regular flights for the

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week were cancelled.

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, the government is working on organizing evacuation flights. So I hope to come home on the nearest provided plane, which is pre-planned for September 13.  I am sorry for the inconvenience and will keep you updated. Yours faithfully, Gerry Palmer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

157 words

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many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Health services are the basic necessity for a person. Private companies have make the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweight its disadvantages.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. -Describe the item you lost -How you lost it -What you would like the insurance company to do for you.

Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?