You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

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Dear Stephan,  I am excited to join your organization as a Software Developer.

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, I am writing to inform you that I can not make it on the arranged date. I was supposed to join the team on September 10, but something came up. Currently, I am on my vacation in Iceland, and my return flight to New York was cancelled because a volcano had erupted. As you might have heard from the latest news, the volcanic eruption started approximately 50 kilometres from the country’s capital city, Reykjavik, where I am now. I am safe, hardly do lava flows pose an immediate threat to people, but unfortunately, all regular flights for the

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week were cancelled.

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, the government is working on organizing evacuation flights. So I hope to come home on the nearest provided plane, which is pre-planned for September 13.  I am sorry for the inconvenience and will keep you updated. Yours faithfully, Gerry Palmer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

157 words

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