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Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

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These days, the list of optional
subjects
 has become wide than in the past. But there are still mandatory and difficult
lessons
 like mathematics and philosophy, which are hard to absorb concepts, are taught to
children
. Many adults think that these difficult
subjects
 should be able to opt.
This
 essay will discuss why these
subjects
 should be able to opt and I will explain in detail my conception about
this
 idea. There are several main reasons to change from the compulsory to the optional mode.
First
 and foremost, these difficult
subjects
 are too abstract for school-aged
children
 because math and philosophy were created by
human
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 mind in their development stage. It seems that
children
 are able to grasp
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abstract ideas later. Compulsory these difficult
lessons
, which are taught as soon as entering the school, should be turned into a more optional mode. The reason why is that if
children
 can’t catch the subject’s concept, they won’t feel enthusiastic about their school
,
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 and
desires
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 of learning will be dropped.
Secondly
, pupils selecting “what they want to learn” may have a good effect rather than we think because they will have a chance to deep dive
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 their attracted
subjects
. Some
children
 aren’t curious about the fundamental
lessons
, but they have to spend their time studying these mandatory
lessons
 and they need much effort to understand these.
As a result
 of
this
, pupils haven’t enough time and energy doing their
favorite
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subjects
 after the general
lessons
. To sum up, it seems that difficult
subjects
 are moving more flexible modes will support to
further
 diversity minds of
children
.
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