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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

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Recently, there is a big debate on the issue that telling the
truth
 or not is the most important consideration in the relationship between
people
.
For
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 my experience, I think telling a
truth
 is the most important consideration in
people
's
relationship
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relationships
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. In the following, I will illustrate my opinion
by
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 two reasons.
First
 of all,
honest
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honestly
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 make the trust stronger between friends or
colleages
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colleagues
. As we know, if
people
 tell a
lie
 to
others
he
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they
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 will not be trusted. When he tell a
truth
,
others
 will believe that he tells a
lie
.
For example
, a person who is honest to
others
, can get real help and get
trust
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 of
others
.
Secondly
, telling a
lie
 always makes things worse not only in work but
also
 in family life. When somebody
do
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 something wrong in his job he should
annouce
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announce
 his mistake to his manager. If he
don't
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doesn't
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 do that
others
 may continue their jobs base on the mistake.
Consequently
, the work will be worse and worse.
On the contrary
, sometimes it is better to tell a
lie
 to
others
,
such
 as telling a
lie
 to a patient. As we know, the sick become worse when a cancer patient
know
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knows
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 his illness. A good way to protect their life is to tell a
lie
. So that many doctors will not tell the
truth
 to a dying patient. To sum up,
people
 should tell the
truth
 to maintain their relationship with other
people
,
although
 sometimes
people
 ha'(e to tell a
lie
.
People
 can get trust when they are honest
to
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others
.
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