Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.

Always telling the truth in any relationship is really the most important consideration for many reasons. I could say that when you lie to someone,
this
person will not trust you anymore and what is a relationship based on? Trust,
confidence
, so the sense of relationship is being lost. Another point is that if the
true
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is
ommited
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omitted
once, it will surely appear sometime, somewhere and probably in the most unexpected way, causing lots of problems for the ones involved. So, the truth is the basis for everything.
First
,
confidence
is the most important aspect of a friendship or a marriage, or anything like that, so, once it is lost, the whole thing goes down in a way that no one can bear it. To avoid losing
confidence
, there is only one way, telling the truth, lying will just help
throwing
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it away.
For example
, a couple decided to go out on the weekend, but the man has a party to go with his friends to where he can not take his girlfriend and
then
he lies to her saying that he is sick and can not go
to
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the date. She
undertands
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understands
him and they do not see each other
in
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that weekend, but he goes to the party and has
much
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fun. Suppose on
monday
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, the girl talks to a friend that saw him at the party and asked why did not she go with him. She found out the
true
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and all
confidence
was lost, the basis for their
relation
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is now gone and what happens
next
is that they break up or if they do not, he will persist on lyes and someday it will
end
. What happened to
this
couple is very common around here and many relationships, even friends and marriages
end
because of something like that. Some may argue that lying once or another will not interfere
anything
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and it is part of a relation, but I strongly disagree, the most important thing is the
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, even if it is to determine the
end
of a relation, it must be told. There are more chances to
end
something lying than saying what really happened
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