In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?(Advantages and Disadvantages)
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both
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children
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Besides
this
,It could take the children
one step forward in their career if they try hard. Children
has
the capability to learn anything if they have proper Change the verb form
have
guidence
.Correct your spelling
guidance
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who has
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fullfil
any deadline related tasks in their corresponding job fields.
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children
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noncommitted
for
over their working behaviour.
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advicing
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advising
advancing
children
to hard work
to gain anything has both
merits and demerit consequences .While it help
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children
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