In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?(Advantages and Disadvantages)

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do anything with perseverance always leads them to fruitful outcomes.

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early age in order to have

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and confidence mindset.If

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, they will struggle in future.

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children

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in life .

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one step forward in their career if they try hard.

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the capability to learn anything if they have proper

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been taught good time management with their study always able to

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any deadline related tasks in their corresponding job fields.

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detrimental effects

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the child.

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mentality.

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can not always get a successful life.Sometimes,It is difficult to get success without having

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genuine passion for the

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it is not a good

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to always instruct

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to do anything with

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.Another important thing to remember,If

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do not have routine life that could arise

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physical and mental problems.

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having sleeping problems as well as

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over their working behaviour. In conclusion,

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advising

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to hard

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to gain anything has

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merits and demerit consequences .While it

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children

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to gain self-confidence and

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career,But false promising and problems related

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mental and physical

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concerning facts related to

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