Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people share a perspective that

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children should not be given

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by their teachers, while others argue that

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plays an important role in the education of children. In my opinion, I strongly believe that a little bit of

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which would not take their entire

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is fine as kids require

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for playing and other activities along with studies. The essay below delves into both views,

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explaining why some people feel

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should not be given

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discussing why others feel the necessity for it. The essay

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explains my point of view and ends, summarising all points in the conclusion.

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with, some folks believe that kids should not be given

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as they need

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for other activities as well. To illustrate, youngsters spend almost half of their day at

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studying so the rest of the

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they have at

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should be for playing and exploring other interests like learning music, painting, basketball, football and so on. Studying all day does not enhance a child's intelligence level, participating in

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extracurricular

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activities does.

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, sitting and reading all day promotes obesity in kids as they do not get the required

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to go outside and play.

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research in the US suggests that a large proportion of

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youngsters suffer from obesity and low intelligence level because their entire days are occupied with reading academic books.

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, adolescents should not be burdened with

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as

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and learning other fun

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important.

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, there are folks who think

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plays an important role in the education of adolescents. And

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is because

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allows them to get a better understanding of certain hard topics.

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, it

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happens that young

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construe certain

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taught in class and

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enables them to clearly understand those

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. It enlightens them with more knowledge and

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secure higher grades in exams.

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,

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is needed as it helps them to get a better understanding of topics, enhance and broaden their horizons and increase their grades. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I feel little bit

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helps continue the flow of studies at

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but teachers should make sure that it does not take up the

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that these minors require for playing and learning creative

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important as well. To conclude, it is important for

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work to be confined within its premises as minors must have

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to learn other creative pursuits but

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of academic studies at

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allows them to construe topics better. That's why I believe

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amount of

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school work

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at

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is fine as it would spare them hours to indulge in other interests.