Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some individuals who desire to same activities in their whole lives avoiding
change
;
however
, other people consider that
change
is a positive thing making their lives more interesting.
This
essay will discuss both sides of these views(perspectives)and provide its own opinion.
First
of all, there are some people who avoid
change
, because they love their jobs, and they are happy with
status
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quo. To be more specific, scientists prefer stability, since their scientific projects take
considerable
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amount of time.
For instance
, to do scientific
discovers
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they have to repeat the same experiments many times.
Moreover
,
artist
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an artist
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does not prefer
change
, because it would diss track them from creating a masterpiece.
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, an artist needs to spend five or ten years of his or her time
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creating a masterwork.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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