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Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Introduction
Gandhi, and
Mother
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Teresa
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 all left an irrevocable mark on humanity. There are seven
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billion
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people
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 on
this
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 planet. What if more of us gave back, even in small ways? The
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effect of those billions of small gestures would be astronomical.
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We want to find meaning in our
lives
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. Giving back and learning how to make an impact
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on
others
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 provides that meaning because it makes
life
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 about something much larger
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than ourselves. It fulfils our essential human need to feel significant as well as the
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human need to contribute. When we help
others
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, we grow in our personal
lives
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 and
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make progress toward unlocking an extraordinary
life
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.
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We break out of our limiting beliefs about how much good one person can actually do
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in the
world
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 and see
first
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-hand that even the smallest acts of kindness can transform
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lives
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.
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The 5 Richest Female Entrepreneurs In The
World
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• Gina Rinehart. Source: fortune.com Georgina Hope Rinehart, known as Gina
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Rinehart is a mining magnate from Australia.
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• Oprah Winfrey. Source: Medium.com Net worth: $3
billion
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, as of 2018. ...
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• Cher Wang. Net worth: $1.6
billion
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 (estimated). ...
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• Wang Laichun. Net worth: $1.9
billion
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, as of 2018
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The Seven Greatest Humanitarians in History
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• The Greatest Humanitarians in History: Harriet Tubman. Harriet Tubman
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was an African American who overcame slavery to...
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• Norman Borlaug. An oft-overlooked figure, Norman Borlaug was responsible
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for an agricultural revolution that saved...
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• Great Humanitarians in History: Martin Luther King. Martin Luther King was
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the African American clergyman and activist.
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•
Mother
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Teresa
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. Born in 1910,
Mother
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Teresa
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 spent 45 years in the service
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of
others
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. A Roman Catholic nun,
Mother
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Teresa
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.
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What is
happiness
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?
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•
Happiness
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 comes from within. It is not outside. It is your mindset.
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•
Happiness
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 is state of mindfulness. It is not in abstract
world
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. It is in
mind
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 and
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temporary. Find joy in small things. It never comes from jobs.
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•
Happiness
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 is the art of never holding in your
mind
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 the memory of any
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unpleasant thing that has passed.”
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• “If you want to be happy, practice compassion. If you want to be happy, practice
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compassion.” ― Dalai Lama XIV, The Art of
Happiness
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• “A disciplined
mind
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 leads to
happiness
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, and an undisciplined
mind
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 leads to
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suffering.” ― Dalai Lama XIV, The Art of
Happiness
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• “If you want
happiness
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 for an hour — take a nap.'
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• If you want
happiness
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 for a day — go fishing.
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• If you want
happiness
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 for a year — inherit a fortune.
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• If you want
happiness
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 for a lifetime — help someone else.”
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• We tend to forget that
happiness
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 doesn't come
as a result
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 of getting something
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we don't have, but rather of recognizing and appreciating what we do have.”
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Others
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 argue that
happiness
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 is a state of
mind
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, and whether you can achieve it
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depends entirely on the individual. Some
people
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 are never satisfied with
life
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, no matter
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how much they have. And you cannot tell those who suffer from depression that
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following a few rules will immediately solve their problems.
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“
Happiness
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 is the meaning and the purpose of
life
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, the whole aim and the end of
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human existence.” Aristotle (384 – 322BC), Greek philosopher Personal
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Happiness
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 Statistics
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The
first
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 thing we notice is that
people
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 working blue-collar jobs (High rank
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Governments Administrator/Judges) report lower levels of overall
happiness
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 in
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every region around the
world
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.
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People
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 around the
world
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 who categorize themselves as a manager, an executive, an
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official, or a professional worker evaluate the quality of their
lives
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 at a little over 6 out
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of 10, whereas
people
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 working in farming, fishing, or forestry evaluate their
lives
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around 4.5 out of 10 on average.
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Freedom:
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Release yourself. “The only real prison is fear, and the only real freedom is
Conclusion
freedom from fear

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