Better driver education for better driving habits is more effective than heavier punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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beneficial for safety on our roads,unlike heavy punishments on wrong and poor driving skills

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agree and will discuss in

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essay. Driving is considered an area that requires skills and expertise ,Enrolling in a driving school class does not require much, it just requires individuals presenting themselves with the requested documents and classes begin.

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theory part of and practicals whereby the student goes through vigorous training on how to handle the kind of

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vehicle

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has enrolled classes for. Practical

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will involve

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having a car that they will be required to drive with the help of a teacher.After the theory and practicals are done in a three months period the student will have to sit an exam to test their skills

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does not mean that they are

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good at driving ,the reason behind

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that the basics have been understood and can be applied well.

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or lack of it cannot be the main reason for reckless driving ,some people are good drivers but they drive under the influence of alcohol

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is punishable by law.Going through the education process is important but it is not the solution.The training

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and so is the government need not rush to issue driving licence but give an ultimatum on the same

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to get their driving licence after the 3months you will need to produce proof that you been driving for let say 6 months

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receive their licence and allowed to drive legally on our roads. In

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Reckless driving can be

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a result of stress,driving under the influence of drugs/

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alcohol

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Education is vital in all those it brings out an understanding of whatever it is you

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