As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food, advantage and disadvantage:

While rural areas used to consume more traditional/healthy

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, the recent decades have seen a rise in the rate of fast

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in countries.

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controversial issue is whether the shift of life is beneficial or not. In fact,

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is to be investigated. On the one hand, it is admittedly accurate that change has myriad merits in remote areas. In the

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industry provides job opportunities for many people, leading to

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to shrinking areas.

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shining example is, Mc Donald’s, you can find it all over the world, which is a restaurant chain and offers cheap fast

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as well as a large number of vacancies for indigenous people. So it is an affordable way to experience new or different fast

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choices. Indeed these should not be the

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factors taken into consideration.

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and foremost society’s health is being increasingly threatened by the effect of fast

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. The case in point is, since

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prepared foods contain so much unhealthy additives and artificial substances, they can impact on

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system, leading to so many disorders

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as obesity, allergy,

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, and bloating. There is another drawback to fast

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, owing to the fact that

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consumerism can be increased air pollution in the country.

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, the average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future. On balance, economically auxiliary as

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, indeed their side effects cannot be ignored. So we are to pay attention to both

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and make

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between them.