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than two years
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together ! As you know I have been really busy
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working in the information technology sector for the
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five years ,I very happy to inform you that I have been promoted
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my senior post of team lead recently.So I have decided to have a celebration party for the same .I joined as
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and today I have been promoted to team lead and it was a wonderful experience and surely will share my journey in team party,I have thought to have a small speach regarding my journey so far . of
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I have sent an invitation email with venue details on it. The celebration will start at 6 pm
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accommodation of three days have been book please find the details of the booking attached with
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more changes or amendments in the plan. regards Ajinkya
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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