Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A vast majority of people are convinced that

globalization

has a positive impact on the economies,

however

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there is

also

a negative side of

globalization

, which should not be omitted.

This

essay agrees with

such

a viewpoint and

firstly

it will discuss the benefits of

globalization

.

Secondly

, disadvantages which the

globalization

brought up to the

countries

will be discussed.

First

of all, needless to

say

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that through

globalization

countries

and

companies

have

an

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access to the global

markets

.

Instead

of selling their product in their own country, they can expand

business

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the business

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and export it to other international

markets

.

Besides

, competition

on

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the global

markets

affected industries in some developing

countries

and usually, it brings new technologies and innovation.

For instance

, there are two multinational

companies

such

as Apple and Samsung who has

competition

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on

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the global

markets

,

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and trying to improve their products every year. Despite on positive sides of

globalization

, there are

also

some negative effects. One of the biggest minuses is job insecurity. Before

globalization

skilled staff got employment in sectors where they receive a high salary,

however

, due to

globalization

, there are many people who are seeking

for

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a job and

companies

take advantage of the cheap labour. To exemplify, there are some

companies

such

as Reebok and Zara who transfer their production to less developed

countries

by virtue of

the

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cheap labour. To conclude, the cultural and economic advantages of

globalization

have concomitant tradeoffs.

This

essay supports the claim that

globalization

has a dramatic impact on the economies,

however

, authorities should be cautious about

pessimistic

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side.