Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A vast majority of people are convinced that

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has a positive impact on the economies,

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however

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there is

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a negative side of

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, which should not be omitted.

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essay agrees with

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a viewpoint and

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it will discuss the benefits of

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.

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, disadvantages which the

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brought up to the

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will be discussed.

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of all, needless to

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that through

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countries

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and

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have

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access to the global

markets

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.

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of selling their product in their own country, they can expand

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and export it to other international

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.

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, competition

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the global

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affected industries in some developing

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and usually, it brings new technologies and innovation.

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, there are two multinational

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such

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as Apple and Samsung who has

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the global

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and trying to improve their products every year. Despite on positive sides of

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, there are

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some negative effects. One of the biggest minuses is job insecurity. Before

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skilled staff got employment in sectors where they receive a high salary,

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, due to

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, there are many people who are seeking

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a job and

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take advantage of the cheap labour. To exemplify, there are some

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such

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as Reebok and Zara who transfer their production to less developed

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by virtue of

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cheap labour. To conclude, the cultural and economic advantages of

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have concomitant tradeoffs.

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essay supports the claim that

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has a dramatic impact on the economies,

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, authorities should be cautious about

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side.