You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say – Give your flight details. – Why were you disappointed? – Suggest some improvements to the airport services.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the services at the Bangalore

airport

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Last

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week, on 15th September ,I visited the

airport

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to catch my flight for a business trip to Australia. I was flying with Air India (flight number-AI8765) ,and it was scheduled at around 1 A.M .

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, I was extremely

dissapointed

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disappointed

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airport

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facilities.

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with, the security check took a long time, and there was no staff to manage the same.

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that, the passengers who were standing in the queue were not following

social-distancing

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which is the need of the hour now,

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, even there was no personnel to ensure that.

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, the washrooms were extremely dirty, and they were not in a condition to be used.

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to that, the

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sanitiser

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machines that are placed at various places were mostly not working. I would like to suggest

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a few improvement points that could be immediately implemented at the

airport

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for seamless operation.

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, I believe that the

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airport

staffs

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who are deployed at the security

check points

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should be trained on effective crowd management by following the COVID protocols.

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, the

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housekeeping

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house keeping

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housekeeping

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department should be given a strict warning so that they ensure that all the places are clean and tidy. Please give the matter your immediate attention. In case, you need any

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details you could reach out to me

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the phone number mentioned on the envelope. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Shreya

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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9 paragraphs

250 words

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