Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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People
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have a
language
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as a communication
media
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. There are more than 200
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in the world.
Although
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local
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are being used in some locations,
people
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are able to connect with
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global
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.
However
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, the same global
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has both positive and negative impacts
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all
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. The
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benefits
of using the global
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are not only
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easily communicate and understanding each
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but a lot of
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resources
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some local areas.
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, some Chinese students have taken courses out of their mainland.
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, everyone uses English as the global
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to study.
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, every
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is provided in English.
Consequently
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, all
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in the classes can understand and acknowledge the resources though they do not come from
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countries.
On the other hand
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,
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global
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may lead to less diversity of literature. The diversity of
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has been raised
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and it impacts
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the
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in each
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. If the local
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removed, the history of that places would be forgotten as well.
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, when European discovered the small islands, they located and grew their own culture to that place.
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,
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day, the local
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and
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were combined and replaced with
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new comers
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. The
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language
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helps the public connects together even they
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in different places in the world.
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, the local
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are
also
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impotant
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important
and cannot be replaced by only
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language
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. The public has to think
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about how
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to maintain
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the diversity
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of
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to keep the
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diverse
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and
cultures
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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