It is better for the students to live away from the home during their university studies rather than staying with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued whether paper

textbooks

should be replaced with electronic ones while others opposed to

this

idea. I believe that print books have indisputable

advantage

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such

as more effective perception of knowledge.

Firstly

,

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essay will discuss the effectiveness of concentration due to using traditional

textbooks

in

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, and

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, it will analyze

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environmental benefits of hi-tech tablets. On the one hand, proponents of conventional

textbooks

base their opinion on the assumption that people have a mental focus on learning when using them and I agree.

This

is because print gave pupils a sense of where they are in the

textbooks

.

As a result

print

textbooks

are less likely to encourage multitasking.

For example

, in American University researchers looked at the studying habits of 429 students and 92 per cent of them said they felt most concentrated when reading traditional

textbooks

.

On the other hand

, digital

textbooks

are more

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friendly as the amount of printing is reducing.

This

probably gives one momentous advantage in as much as the electronic

textbooks

usage lessens the number of the trees that become cut down for paper. In the United States of

America

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research has shown that the country takes thirty-two million trees to make two billion books. Despite

this

, others wood production produced

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a large number of saplings. In conclusion, though many people may vary in their opinions, I am firmly convinced that tables are not supposed to have a chance to replace paper

textbooks

.

This

is due to the fact that, despite the impact on the ecology, on no account, should the importance of using conventional

textbooks

on concentration