Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent days many

countries

are experiencing instability which has resulted in refugees.I partial agree that wealthy

countries

should accept more refugees and provide them with basic needs

such

as food and housing

First

developed

countries

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have large amounts of money which can be used to fund

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their necessities.

For instance

, Western

countries

helped many

Afghanistans

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Afghanistan's

to settle in their

countries

when they experienced unrest. Most of the nations allocate money

that is

particularly for

this

course.

Secondly

, most of these

countries

are safe

hence

most displaced individuals feel secure.

For example

,when war broke in Syria many found peace in Greece

hence

they were able to experience freedom. Wealthy states should be forced into taking in many fugitives as

this

will not help them build their homeland.

Furthermore

,

this

will increase poverty levels which can be detrimental to

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future generations.

For example

,women

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remain back in Afghanistan to fight for

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of the female gender against which was applauded by several sovereign states. In my conclusion,it is the sole responsibility of every citizen to build their fatherland and not

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.