In a number of counties, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast train between cities. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people support that governments should spend much money on producing new railroads for extremely fast

trains

like Shinkansen in Japan. While

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others argue that they should focus on improving existing vehicles

first

. In my opinion, these two statements are both important that must be planned as soon as possible. Some citizens think that producing many

train

lines and buying hi-tech

trains

will make their country more advance in many ways.

Initially

, people can have easy and convenient trips, they can travel among cities

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their own easier than using personal cars or buses.

Also

, the fastest

trains

can send food and local products faster and fresher than using traditional transportations like trucks. In that case, the number of

over populations

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in the city will decrease because people can live in their

home

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without struggling on

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.

For example

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japanese

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populations mostly live in

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suburb

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since they have many

train

lines and the fastest

train

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Shinkansen.

However

, there are many opinions that maintaining some existing public transport

such

as

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and buses is more impact than the previous idea.

To begin

with an accident from public transport, many cars crashed and poor buses cases are caused by lacking in quality.

Therefore

, these public vehicles should be maintained all the time for keeping passengers safe.

In addition

, enhancing public transportations spend time less than producing a whole new one which is spent more than ten years to finish it all compared to improving the service. In conclusion, expanding

train

stations for up-to-date

trains

have many positive sides that make

citizen

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life better. While

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continuous upgrading existing transportations spend less time and prevent an accident on the roads. From my point of view, these vital projects

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both

effectives

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effective

views and it should be planned altogether including improving for short term and

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producing new railways for long term.