In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside.some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.what is your opinion about this?

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The population has been increasing so the requirement of new
buildings
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are increased due to lack of spaces in urban
area
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people
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location in village for construct new homes.some
people
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tend to believe that it will badly affect the rural
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and never construct houses or
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there.I partially agree with
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statement the reasons I will explain in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one hand,due to various reasons villages should be protected.
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,
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have made the urban
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more crowded so compared with metropolitan cities rural areas are blessed with pure resources
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the invention of apartments create several issues
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as pollution ,contaminate water resources .
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, one of the multinational companies built a building in a village which leads to several environmental issues and the countryside lost its precious purities.
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,increment in the number of accommodation facilities of family in countryside enlarge the population so it will lead to several issues s.
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are blessed with greeneries the invention of house eradicate trees.
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, the population is increasing so the requirement for new houses is significant.most of the urban areas are rush so
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like to choose a calm and quiet place for homes which
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give them
a stress-free mind.
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of new
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help the development of a village
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it leads to the implementation of infrastructure
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,
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could enhance their lifestyles. To conclude,protection of rural
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are essential
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utilize enough lands in villages help reduce majority problems in cities.it is predicting that in the future
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construct
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in villages while protecting natural resources.
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