In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health issues are a vital topic in some of the nations these days because of excessive consumption of junk

foods

. The statement given in the topic suggests authorities increase tax on fast

foods

. My perception is totally agreed with the statement because without introducing that many penalties at least to the fast-food producers, they will not understand the real harm that they are doing to society.

Also

, some

people

might say that

people

should maintain some self-control to avoid fast

foods

,

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however

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in

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,essay it will be proven that major responsibility is on hands of

government

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. Without showing the bad consequences to the fast meal producers, it is

usless

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useless

to ask them; to add some

nutrion

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nutrition

value on their

foods

, to limit the unethical advertising

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campaigns

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glucomate

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gluconate

glutamate

which is a chemical compound rejected by many countries because of

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poisonic

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poisonous

behaviour. Many of the celebrities were used for their advertising program which

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cannot

be recommended at all. So, when authorized

people

increase the taxes,

then

the food manufacturing companies might think

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new ways of adding more

nutrion

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nutrition

nutrient

value to their

foods

as

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they can rely on fresh fruits and vegetables but not using lots of unacceptable chemicals? Governments are capable of imposing an extra tax value over the bad meal manufacturing companies despite whether some of the population could think that society

also

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some responsibility to maintain some kind of

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discipline

over the junk

foods

. As a country, there is no need

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leadership if

people

have to

take

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their own decisions like in

this

situation. President onwards,

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PriceMinister

and all the ministers were authorized with the choice of

people

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job of the government to show the correct path to their supportive crowd. In conclusion, without adding more restrictions on food manufacturing companies who are producing more fast

foods

, it is impossible to overcome the health issues.