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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to such services?

#people #language #translation #apps #services
It is irrefutable that in
this
 contemporary era. Due to
globalization
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people
 are using a plethora of
languages
 to understand things so the tendency of using
language
translation
 apps is increased over the years,
Although
, there are some disadvantages of that merits
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 them. To commence with, the best possible benefit is that community are not only getting together via
this
 technological usage but
also
 they can understand each other in various ways
such
 as
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 rituals, cultural and mindset even they can learn verity of technique through
this
 medium.
For instance
, according to a survey, 35% of
people
 opine that they understand more than five
languages
 using a
translation
app
.
Furthermore
, one more pro is that
language
translation
app
 plays a vital role for tourist, due to that they can explore very effectively and deeply understand the wide range of culture, as a consequence, Improvement seen in tourism over the decades. Altogether, these are viable reasons
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 not keep away. On the paradoxical side, there are some drawbacks as well,
First
 and foremost is that
,
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People
 are getting predictable on
translation
 apps
,
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 so that
Inetrest
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Interest
 in
languages
 in form of learning and communicating getting decline. as a repercussion, the spread of
languages
 among different
culture
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 was restricted. Another con is that
,
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 sometimes
people
 felt annoyed due to fully depends on
app
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, so neither they can communicate with
people
 provided that if they can not access
online
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language
translation
app
, So, these are some factual demerits
which
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 we can not ignore. In recapitulation,
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 would like to reiterate that
although
,
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 use of online
language
translation
app
 has some drawbacks the advantage is far too many to be ignored.
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