Competition for university study is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is conspicuous that in

this

current era,

people

have become much more competitive in trying to get a seat in a

university

.

This

increasing trend, in my opinion, is just because welfare has increased in various societies,

thus

, the middle class are able to think about going to

university

in order to engross themselves in science and other fields of study.

This

changed attitude definitely is positive on the whole. Welfare and income have always been decisive in determining a person's destiny and continuously have had a direct role

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whether someone is able to continue his area of interest in

university

or not.

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trend can be validated

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a glance at both developing and even underdeveloped nations. In the former countries, those communities

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the majority of their citizens are living above the poverty line, there is a great temptation among

people

to partake in universities' entrance exams to be accepted in what disciplines

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they are eager since they do not have any financial obsession to get them prevented from reaching to their dreams,

moreover

,

this

tendency has been on the rise for good decades in developing countries like Iran.

People

are getting used to taking part in academic classes despite the fact that

this

ideology would not have been scattered among citizens since they barely would be

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to pay the expenditure of both their study and their lives so they must have selected either of them.

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today, there are some families who are not capable

to join

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academic groups, thanks to the enhanced financial status,

universities'

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seats have been occupied rapidly.

Although

it is so likely that some disadvantaged families would be left behind, growing

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the number of those going to

university

leads to enhancing the societies’ culture and

developing

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cutting-edge

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technologies. Many new devices are being produced by

universities’

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alumni;

therefore

, never will human beings have access to these feats unless by

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help from educated

people

.

Also

, coping with modern technologies has converted

people

into informed creatures since the world has turned into a global village and fast-paced transferring contributes to that any news from the farthest point of the world reaches another part of

this

planet.

This

speed makes the individuals’ culture

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in

spit

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of some tangible complications having been created owing to

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of enough knowledge to cope with these new-emerged gadgets. To recapitulate, earning more money than the amount that

people

used to catch as a prominent reason is responsible for increasing the number of applicants who want to

be graduated

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higher degrees. Based on the above-mentioned points,

this

state-of-the-art frame of mind can be considered a positive trend since it increases

people

’s awareness.