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Nowadays, more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What are some possible solutions? What problems does this cause?

#people #jobs
Lately
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jobs
 have been scarce,
thus
 causing competition in all sectors.Today the
jobs
 that we have cannot be classified into classes or age,as long as one has the capacity any job is doable.
To begin
 with ,the youths are said to occupy a larger proportion
in
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of
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 about 80% population of the world.With the current situation around the
globe
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jobs
 have become rare and hard to find,
thus
 creating no age gap.It is not a shock to see an old man working in a construction site,and doing other manual
jobs
people
 have resorted to anything that puts food on their table as a job worth doing. Competition for
jobs
 with
the
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young
people
 is risky because
this
 can easily lead to crime and lack of education,the young
people
 will not find a reason to go to school and acquire knowledge,simply because it will not benefit them and considering the levels of
experince
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experience
 required for employment young
people
 will not get a chance,so the
easist
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easiest
 way to get money will be to engage in illegal
jobs
,business and
this
 will make the economy crumble,a good example is what is happening in Africa Currently old
people
 are getting
jobs
 meant for the youths and youths are just idle,an idle mind is a devils workshop. In
conclusion
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 competition is healthy but if
its
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it
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 a chance to ride on others and
opress
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oppress
 them,
then
its
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it's
it is
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 not
advicable
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advisable
,
people
 at the age of retirement should allow young
people
 have the chances for them to gain the experience needed.
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