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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spend on more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many people support that Physical Education classes should be included in school
subject
 as
this
 will improve
children
 health.
In contrast
, some disagree with
this
 statement because students have already gained a lot of responsibilities. In
this
 writing essay, there is a discussion in both arguments and
also
 the writer opinion.
To begin
 ,with, Physical
subject
 is crucial to the curriculum and the student's life. According to recent studies,
children
 tend to spend more time on electronic devices than do physical activities.
This
 issue can lead to both mental and physical diseases,
such
 as migraines and obesity.
Furthermore
, the activities in school, nowadays, are likely to stay indoor;
for instance
, experimenting in the laboratory.
Therefore
, including the
PE
subject
 is an effective method to improve student's health as
this
 practice will provide time and space for
children
 to explore and improve their physical movement. 
On the other hand
, some people contradict
this
 practice as it will provide the extension work and
children
 should focus on academic subjects. It is really competitive for entering to acknowledgeable university or company;
therefore
, students have to put a strong effort into their academic duties. By increasing
PE
 subjects, will provide more responsibilities to the
children
. For those reasons, it is insignificant to include
PE
 subjects in the curriculum.
Moreover
, physical activities can be responsible for parents which they can practice at home. In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of including
PE
subject
. In my point of view, it is significant to have
this
subject
 at school as
this
 will provide exercising time in order to release tension from academic tasks.
However
, the
subject
 should not increase extra tasks for
children
.
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