Not all drivers obey the laws while driving on roads. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to fix this problem?

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motorists

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break

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of lack of education and high-level-

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, the main reason why individuals violate

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law is they have not been trained in the school. In fact, some people learn how to drive

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take a test to get a diver license. They

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cannot understand clearly about driving rules, even though they are currently driving on roads

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, drivers are not anxious about punishment due to police

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privately receives

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from offenders,

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encourages motorists to think that money can

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, in Cambodia, a diver hitting someone by car on road accidentally will have to pay around

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family without imprisonment. The primary

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problem is to reduce

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officers who accept

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from offenders should be punished

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, which is considered as

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corrupting

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activities.

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punishment

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should subside to all

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being hard working.

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will mentally defend them from

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their own career if they are well treated. In conclusion, according to

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of knowledge of

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as well as

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corruption

, it is developing

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accidents.

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should make some

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remedies

to lower down the corruption level in

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enforcement

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