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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion

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A
teacher
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 is a person who teaches and provides knowledge to students.
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 people prefer to study with the same
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 for many years. In my opinion, learning from several
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 would have more
advantage
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 than
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stuck
 with the same
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.
Firstly
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, students can learn various techniques from different
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. Each
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teachers
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 has different teaching
styles
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.
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, children can expand their experiences through the diversity of teaching methods. To illustrate, one English
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 advises the technique to remember vocabularies by categorization while other
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 share the trick to memorize by singing a song.
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, children can leverage and adapt both strategies to their preference of recognizing new words. Another
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 of not learning with the same
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 is the expertise area of
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. The higher level, the depth
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 you have to learn.
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 they have a great teaching technique, one
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 could not teach all topics of the subjects.
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, regardless teenagers love their sciences
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 in
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secondary school
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 when they grow up and move to a high school, there are
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experts to teach in separated classes of sciences
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 as biology, chemistry, and physics which is not capable to cover by only one person. To conclude, juveniles should have new
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 each year when they move to
upper
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the upper
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 level of study. The benefits are not only the diversity of teaching styles but
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 areas of expertise.
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, the institutions have to make sure the
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 are qualified to produce
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quality students to be the good global citizens
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