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Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?

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In the present era, international study is becoming highly popular amongst
students
 and they prefer to educate themselves in other nations.
This
 essay will discuss both merits and demerits of
students
 studying abroad followed by a conclusion. On the one side, opting for an international
education
 develops
students
. It means they learn
a
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 skill of living without parents and to study as well as earn a livelihood for themselves and manage time for their studies as well as part-time jobs.
As a result
, they become mature as they understand the value of both time and money.
In addition
, the
students
 are provided with better career opportunities after studying abroad.
This
 is because they study a high-quality
education
 where the practical aspects are given priority over theoretical ones.
As a result
, they are equipped with all the essential skills and are able to secure employment in future.
For instance
, the
students
 that are educated abroad are preferred by the reputed organizations and are offered high pay.
On the other hand
,
students
 travelling abroad for
education
 are purely a loss for their own nation.
This
 is because post-
education
, they become an
addict
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of
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 improved quality of life in developed nations.
Also
,
such
 nations
offer
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 stay back visas to
the
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international
students
 encouraging them to work in their nation and serve their
ecomony
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economy
.
As a result
, no student prefer to travel back to his/her own country to contribute
the
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 economy.
For instance
, Canada offers
3 year
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 work permit post 2
year
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 of
education
 which opens the gate for permanent residency and no international student prefer to travel back to their mother country. Conclusively,
although
 international
education
 evolves
students
 and helps them to achieve success, it takes them away from their own country forever.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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