some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A few denizens in the opinion that the primary difficulty with our surroundings in the present time is that some types of vegetations and

animals

withdraw our society. Whereas

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some localities believed that the problem given in the

first

ideology

is secondary,there are other primary negative issues in the society. I am in the opinion to support both ideologies in the ratio of 60% and 40 % respectively. To embark

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the

first

ideology

, might be a good reason

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social imbalance. Some of the vegetations and

animals

loss by us by the time.

This

may be taken place due to the interference of human beings.Excess use of resources may cause harm to the valuable plants,

animals

and birds

also

.

For instance

Stag, an animal just like dear, these days we cannot see it. According to the survey done by WHO some of the medicinal plants

also

withdraw our environment,

such

kinds of changes are the main reason for surrounding destruction.It is pertinent to mention here that it is enhancing day by day. Now, coming on the

second

ideology

, people do not deny the

first

ideology

,

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they said that primary problems are of another category, like smoke from industries, which cause air, water and soil pollution by using low-class waste management. Smoke emission from vehicles may be the primary difficulty in the environment.

In addition

to it cutting down the deep forests is

also

there in the line. Moving

further

it

also

attracts the mining issue. In my opinion, the

first

ideology

is a very serious issue but it does not mean that

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put vielon the

second

ideology

. The

first

idea contains

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plants and

animals

whereas the

second

one consists of pollution issues. They both are correct in the ratio of 60 % and 40 % positively.

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but not least, the human being is a social animal with intellectual power. Only humans can stop

such

wrong and illegal issues.

However

, if the measuring step will not be taken in the future, the consequences will create

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greater problems than

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