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Some believe that it is beneficial to show foreign films while others feel this can have a negative impact on local culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There are different points of view regarding the influence of
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foreign movies on local culture. Some
people
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 argue that it will be more beneficial for
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country
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a country
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 to
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buy
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films
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 from other
countries
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.
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, others believe that shooting national
cinema
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 is much better. In my opinion, both statements are right in their own way. On the one hand, foreign
cinema
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 promotes international cultural exchange and economic development in the host
country
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. Thanks to
films
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 from other
countries
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,
people
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 will have the opportunity to know more about the world and its various cultures.
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, an American can learn about oriental values and traditions from a Chinese or Korean drama.
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 the Asian viewer can be amazed by the dynamic lifestyle presented in Western blockbusters.
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, the use of foreign
films
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 can generate a lot of income.
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, in my
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 many
people
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 want to see something new, different from their everyday environment.
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, foreign
films
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 are more often bring good sales to the
country
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, than local movies.
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,
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 from other
countries
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 can have a positive impact.
On the other hand
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, preserving one's own culture and providing jobs in
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cinema
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the cinema
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 area play an equally important role. Through local
films
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 and TV shows, children and adolescents learn about the values of their
country
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. If
people
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 are given knowledge about their culture from childhood,
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country
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 will probably get citizens who venerate and are proud of their customs.
In addition
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,
people
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 whose professions are related to
cinema
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 need a job. Actors, filmmakers, cameramen should be given the opportunity to prove themselves and their abilities. In
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 way, for the development of the film industry, movies should
also
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 be produced domestically. According to
me
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, foreign
films
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 can bring both material and educational benefits.
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,
countries
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 should
also
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 not forget about the improvement of their own
cinema
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. In conclusion,
cinema
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 is one of the most popular forms of entertainment today. If
countries
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 manage to find a balance in the use of foreign and local
films
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,
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 can positively affect the development of the film industry.
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