In today’s world of advanced science & technology many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters & writers. What can the art tell us about life that science cannot?

In a world full of fast paces towards technological inventions and scientific advancements,
art
has always been a refuge.
Although
in our modern days it witnessed the newest of the
science
field, the human eye kept loyal to all kinds of arts. In
this
essay, I will discuss why the
art
craft is a tutor with much to teach the world, which
science
simply cannot. Addressing the intellectuality in humans and widening their horizons has always been
art
’s number one job.
This
is simply because, when exposed to
art
such
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good song, a beautiful painting or even an honest book,
people
tend to acquire
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creativity of their own. Artists and
art
admirers,
for instance
, show a higher level of creativity and thinking outside the box when compared to less artistic or pure practical
people
, according to a study published by
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psychiatric association; APA . Without
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art
,
people
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drawn in narrow perspectives and eventually give in to anxiety and stress. The broader we let
art
make of our horizons, the more innovative we become.
In addition
to it being a source of creativity,
art
is
also
considered a unified language. Unlike
science
, you don’t have to study
art
to understand it or get touched by it. It is simply a global language spoken by everyone. Van Gogh
for example
, through his infamous painting “starry night”, could deliver his perspective to everyone around the world. All nationalities with all their tongue languages could understand
this
very painting’s language and interpret it
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their own lives.
Art
not only
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a unique form of connectedness between all kinds of
people
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it
also
implicates a feeling of companionship on those isolated individuals when they experience it. The greater we are involved in
art
, the more we feel connected and understood. To conclude,
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always
favored
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art
no matter how great their surrounding technology gets. Through its abilities to inflict mental pleasure and connect all sorts of
people
,
art
has outdone
science
in these matters.
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  • subjective perspective
  • emotional depth
  • human experiences
  • cultural insight
  • historical context
  • social commentary
  • creativity and innovation
  • self-expression
  • personal narratives
  • critical thinking
  • alternative viewpoints
  • sense of wonder
  • diverse human experiences
  • identity
  • inner world
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