In today’s world of advanced science & technology many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters & writers. What can the art tell us about life that science cannot?

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In a world full of fast paces towards technological inventions and scientific advancements,

art

has always been a refuge.

Although

in our modern days it witnessed the newest of the

science

field, the human eye kept loyal to all kinds of arts. In

this

essay, I will discuss why the

art

craft is a tutor with much to teach the world, which

science

simply cannot. Addressing the intellectuality in humans and widening their horizons has always been

art

’s number one job.

This

is simply because, when exposed to

art

such

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good song, a beautiful painting or even an honest book,

people

tend to acquire

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creativity of their own. Artists and

art

admirers,

for instance

, show a higher level of creativity and thinking outside the box when compared to less artistic or pure practical

people

, according to a study published by

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psychiatric association; APA . Without

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art

people

simply

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drawn in narrow perspectives and eventually give in to anxiety and stress. The broader we let

art

make of our horizons, the more innovative we become.

In addition

to it being a source of creativity,

art

also

considered a unified language. Unlike

science

, you don’t have to study

art

to understand it or get touched by it. It is simply a global language spoken by everyone. Van Gogh

for example

, through his infamous painting “starry night”, could deliver his perspective to everyone around the world. All nationalities with all their tongue languages could understand

this

very painting’s language and interpret it

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their own lives.

Art

not only

create

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a unique form of connectedness between all kinds of

people

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also

implicates a feeling of companionship on those isolated individuals when they experience it. The greater we are involved in

art

, the more we feel connected and understood. To conclude,

people

has

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always

favored

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art

no matter how great their surrounding technology gets. Through its abilities to inflict mental pleasure and connect all sorts of

people

art

has outdone

science

in these matters.

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subjective perspective
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In today’s world of advanced science & technology many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters & writers. What can the art tell us about life that science cannot?

Your opinion

Some people believe that professional, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in any country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Q. Cases of bullying in school are increasing and worsening. What do you think are the cause of this? How can we tackle this issue?

in some cultures, childeren are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer the work call and home call at any place, or 7 days a week. Do you think there are more negative or positive effects on both individuals and society?

Research indicates that nowadays some consumers are much less influenced by advertising than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?