Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Many students continue their education into bachelor degree but they forget to find which major that suite and have a high

demand

in the working world.

As a result

, there are many fresh

graduates

who could face hard to get a job that fitted their passion. I personally think that the root of

this

problem is the amount of offering positions that opens for fresh

graduates

. Young students usually choose a major base on what they are passionate about. It causes some major have an over

demand

, as a

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result majority of the

graduates

could not get a job that they want.

For example

, there is more student with finance background

then

engineering background which causes more finance graduate is unemployed or could not get a position that suite to their background.

This

situation is one of the main factors that cause

this

situation.

This

problem could be done if the student is aware of the

demand

from the employer. If students do research regarding certain fields of major that have high requests for work, it will reduce the amount of unemployment

moreover

this

action could avoid

graduates

from getting a position that did not fit them.

For instance

, in

this

modern-day, there is more

demand

for computer engineer rather than environmental engineering. To conclude, one of the main reasons that cause many young

graduates

did not position that they want is overdemand from the employers. In my opinion , in order to reduce

this

situation, the fresh graduate should do some research on the major that has a high

demand

offered by the employer.