In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

These days the public aimed with serious health issues especially the communities who lived there,

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the main aspect belongs to junk

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, I will discuss cuisines, how

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in the public,

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trend. Through

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, a point I will begin with meals and the side effect of dealing with them on daily basis.

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of all, Fast

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is the main factor

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we are dealing with tell

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day ,especially with a new generation.

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,

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industries obtained beneficial results due to their exportation to restaurants

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as; KFC, Hardee's,

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it had mysterious ingredients which will lead humanity to be in a bad shape

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of "Obesity"

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permanent illness due to excessive snacks will allow the justice to unable to control

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disease.

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, when they think

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type of meal

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normal

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let them take another look at aide effects of these junk meals because it is totally wrong and the population will suffer from a tragic type of illness as an example of High blood pressure, and

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but not least "Diabetes" which it is a crucial reason for being addicted upon it yet will terminate their health status in a miserable situation that's why the Authority took unique care about with ascending the

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taxation. I believe that the Government should take a good consideration about

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trend, to minimize it as much as they can, due to bad involvement to the society and how it affects their physical, and well health being. In conclusion,

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regulation will improvise the justice to control

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impact and prevent them to lean to natural

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instead

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of fast

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