In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast. It is therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
These days the public aimed with serious health issues especially the communities who lived there,
thus
the main aspect belongs to junk food
. Firstly
, I will discuss cuisines, how it
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then
I will provide my point of view regarding this
trend. Through this
, a point I will begin with meals and the side effect of dealing with them on daily basis. First
of all, Fast food
is the main factor thus
we are dealing with tell this
day ,especially with a new generation. Moreover
, Food
industries obtained beneficial results due to their exportation to restaurants such
as; KFC, Hardee's, in addition
, Macdonald upon this
it had mysterious ingredients which will lead humanity to be in a bad shape as a result
of "Obesity" also
this
permanent illness due to excessive snacks will allow the justice to unable to control this
disease. Therefore
, when they think this
type of meal are
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is
then
let them take another look at aide effects of these junk meals because it is totally wrong and the population will suffer from a tragic type of illness as an example of High blood pressure, and last
but not least "Diabetes" which it is a crucial reason for being addicted upon it yet will terminate their health status in a miserable situation that's why the Authority took unique care about with ascending the food
taxation. I believe that the Government should take a good consideration about this
trend, to minimize it as much as they can, due to bad involvement to the society and how it affects their physical, and well health being. In conclusion, this
regulation will improvise the justice to control this
impact and prevent them to lean to natural food
instead
of fast food
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