Most individuals think that modern
music
can have
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impact
on
youngsters
, while others think it provides
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impact
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them. To my opinion, Modern
music
only brings
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impact
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todaysChange to a genitive case
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youngsters
, because, most
music
has no social values and
causes
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to them and their
community
.
People
who believe that modern
music
provides them positive
impact
doesn'
t
realize that
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music
is rhythm, which should provide
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message and peace of mind. Comparing to older
songs
modern
songs
have too
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instrument noises, which is
also
in high pitch. Recent
songs
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lessChange the quantifier
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words, most of the words are not clear in pronunciation,
therefore
it doesn'
t
provide any value to the listeners.
People
argue that the tunes present in the
music
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of mind while listening, which is a valid point, but, there are only
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songs
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been released like
such
in recent times. Considering
these modern Change the determiner
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music
can'
t
provide any positive
impact
to
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youngsters
.
When it comes to
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negative
impact
, modern
music
causes
more bad effects to the young generations and
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their
community
.
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people
prefer to hear
songs
using
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,
this
instrument makes noises closer to the ears. When
music
has high pitch noise heard in
such
manner
causes
ear failure, due to
this
people
will become deaf sooner.
TodaysCorrect your spelling
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music
is causing more anger and rage in
youngsters
, because, the high instrument noises
causes
them to do more aggressive things.
This
kind of
behaviorChange the spelling
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causes
unnecessary problems to their surroundings and their
community
,
therefore
modern
music
only
provideChange the verb form
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negativeCorrect article usage
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impact
toChange preposition
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this
society.
In conclusion, Modern
music
isn'
t
like old
music
which
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socialCorrect article usage
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message and
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to hear. It only
causes
ill-effects on
youngsters
and
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them
to Change the verb form
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act aggressively while hearing them,
this
eventually
causeChange the verb form
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bad situations to them and make a bad impression
overChange preposition
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them in
this
community
.