Rich countries often give money to poorer countries,but it does not solve poverty. Therfore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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by developed nations has become increasingly popular.

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, some people claim that financial aid can not mitigate their impoverishment and

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they should be given other types of help.

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essay will argue why financial aid is entirely necessary

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assisting poor

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despite some drawbacks. People have always been sceptical that the government of poor nations would exploit the

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provided by developed states. They hold the view that the authorities would use

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in organising political campaigns and other governmental needs rather than investing in public education and health care services.

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, in

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like Syria, the

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received from developed states is used in buying weapons and not for public necessities. These instances

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have instilled fear in public.

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, reducing the cost of importing and exporting as well as encouraging industrial development would be more effective as

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would lead to more employment opportunities.

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it is clear that financial aid alone does not solve poverty. Despite

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is the most convenient way of assisting undeveloped nations. These funds can be used to develop educational and health care sectors.

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, if more public schools and hospitals are inaugurated

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unprivileged citizens would have proper access to education and medical treatment.

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, illiteracy and lack of medical care would no longer be the reason for their poverty.

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, financial support can be very efficient when

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are suffering from the aftereffects of natural disasters. In these cases, funds can be used to rebuild infrastructures, regrow crops and provide clean water and sanitation to people.

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apparent that monetary support is the most effective form of assistance. To conclude, sometimes due to

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the exploitation

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of funds by politicians, it might not reduce impoverishment, but

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the benefits provided by monetary assistance is unrivalled.

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, I completely disagree that other forms of help

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better than

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