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In some culture are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and more disadvantages of giving children these massages?

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In some culture,
people
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 believe that if they try more
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 achieve more and an idiom are popular among
people
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 ‘ no pain no gain’. So they teach it to their
children
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 as a
life
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 attitude. It maybe
have
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 some drawbacks and benefits as well that
children
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’s personality and future
life
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 may be affected by
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 viewpoint. On the one hand, with regard to
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 attitude
children
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 learn that they should attempt relentlessly if they want to achieve their goals.
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 , it helps to boost their some positive personality aspects like independence or optimistic attitudes and improve their
life
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 expectancy.
For instance
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, if a kid wants to be a doctor, he or she knows that ought to study hard and enter
to
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university with a good score to become a doctor. For the
second
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 instance, youth are taught that should work hard to achieve more money and buy some facilities
such
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 as a big house and luxury car.
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, young
people
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 are predicted to succeed more than others that do not have
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 belief in their culture.
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, it might have some demerits impact on
children
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 future
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 as adults.
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 most of the time
people
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 can peak their goals if try hard enough, their abilities are limited as a human being.
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, some youngsters are told that if work more can get their dreams but a person cannot work more than 12 hours for a long time for more income. occasionally folk
think
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 try hard means like ambitious. thereby, if
children
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 are brought up with
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this
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these
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attitudes
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attitude
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 and cannot achieve their wish, they will be depressed and hopeless that
it
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which
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 has many detrimental impacts. To conclude, the cultural
believes
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 have some advantages and disadvantages but all aspects of
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 viewpoint should be cleared for
children
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 if parents want to teach it for
children
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’s future
life
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 and bold its pros for their teenagers.
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