Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

In recent years, the percentage of

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rate

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has been increased due to several

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the causes and how to overcome these

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and find the most effective ways to reduce

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rate

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with, it is commonly believed that using

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and narcotic substances will lead to

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and increase the

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of

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because

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these people who used

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frequently or

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people

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are not truly conscious.

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, the addictive person may make lots of crimes to get extra money to be able to buy more

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, we live in an age when many of us are believe that the

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scene in lots of

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will encourage and contribute

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raising the criminal

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to imitate what they see in these

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reality. Some scenarios of these

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describe the culprit as a victim and give so many

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to gain

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empathy from audiences.

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, we need to find solutions to overcome

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crime

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rate

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need to control and prevent using

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drugs

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and narcotics material to eliminate the main reason

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rising the

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of

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, we should monitor what our children see and we need to make an effective discussion with them to illustrate and explain that , there is no excuse to do

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crime

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. To conclude, after

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both

reasons

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and some effective solutions to reduce the

rate

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of

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we can say that we need to restrict and prohibit using of

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to reduce

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rate

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and we should make an effective discussion with our children and monitor what they see in the

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