Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Economically stable countries mostly support underprivileged

nations

with monetary assistance but giving

money

does not solve the issue of penury. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the content that

money

only provides short term support to these poor

nations

, whereas other fundamental amenities can bring them out of poverty.

To begin

with, supporting with

money

only solve the issue temporarily, but to mitigate it permanently, long term planning is required. Educational

facilities

and job opportunities can make the people of the nation capable enough to help their own economy, thereby, making them independent. To illustrate, if developed territories helped the underdeveloped country to construct more schools and colleges or people of all

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and

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then

they would be able to ward off illiteracy from that province which would be a great step towards development.

Likewise

, they can carry out many training programs to help the citizens of that nation become capable enough to easily get employment in big companies.

Thus

, economically stable provinces can help

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underprivileged

nations

with education and employment to ward off poverty.

Furthermore

,

money

provided by these affluent states might not be used in the correct way

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should be if they land in the hand of a corrupted politician.

For instance

,

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given to the Syrian government for development is used by them in buying weapons and explosives. To avoid

such

circumstances, these rich states should come forward to create new law plans for these poor countries and make sure that all

facilities

are available for all groups of people. They can

also

aid in improving healthcare

facilities

all across towns. They can support these underdeveloped states construct more hospitals and clinics and organize programs to train more doctors so that the province is ready to combat any pandemic or epidemic.

Hence

, affluent

nations

can make new law plans against corrupted politicians and improve healthcare

facilities

to help in the development of these

poverty stricken

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provinces. To conclude, the essay explains the reasons for my agreement

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the context that rich countries should provide other types of assistance to the poor territories rather than financial aid. Particularly, because other fundamental amenities

such

as education, job opportunities, healthcare and new law plans can permanently mitigate penury from these underdeveloped territories.