Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, that the

process

of

globalization

is enhancing the worldwide field of economy.

However

, there are

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plenty of adverse

sides

, that are have to be taken into consideration as well as its beneficial

sides

. I tend to agree that its negative

sides

should not be pushed aside.

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essay will provide both perspectives on that issue. To start with,

globalization

is one of the priorities to build up

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stable economic state. The

process

includes a lot of

countries

resulting in their strong and friendly relationship. Each country, involving in

this

process

, take a chance to reinforce

financial

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area and witness

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growth in that field. By interacting with other

countries

, the levels of export and import rise, which means that

countries

produce and transport their product to other places. Apart from that, developed

countries

financially help developing

countries

. Thereby their infrastructure and technological spheres substantially improve, which lead to business progress. Looking

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, except acting positively,

globalization

affects

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in

negative

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way too. By mentioning and emphasizing its profitable aspects in economics, people are

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to overlook its opposite impact. As a matter of a fact, the

process

of

globalization

has an

unfavorable

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influence on spheres

such

as culture, social area, ecology etc. Due to

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Western

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lifestyle

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other

countries

, their historical and cultural values are in danger

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be fallen into oblivion.

Additionally

, owing to

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of the topic among

young

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generation, there are appearing a number of sub-cultures that altering the world view of teenagers.

Besides

that, development in infrastructure and technology can cause environmental problems like air and water pollution, which might lead to health issues. To conclude,

globalization

is

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problem, that

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a dispute on its effects on

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. It is obvious, that there are a bunch of economic benefits,

however

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its harmful

sides

are

also

presented. In my viewpoint, people should mention both of its

sides

and consider

this

topic objectively without bias.