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Some
people
say that you will fully enjoy the film if you watch it in the cinema
, however
, others say that we can use
our phone
or tablet to watch a movie
. In my opinion, it is better to use
your phone
or tablet and, in this
essay, I will state the reasons for my viewpoint.
One side of the argument is that it is better to watch movies in the cinema
. The main reason for this
is because people
will enjoy the huge screen, and they will see the characters clearly. Also
, they will hear a good quality of sound effects because of the speaker. Another reason that makes people
choose to go to the cinema
is because of the atmosphere. The aircon and the dark surroundings make the movie
more interesting, especially when people
chose to watch a horror movie
.
Despite the above arguments, I am holding the position that it is better to watch movies on your phone
or tablet. The main reason for holding my viewpoint is because,
you do not need to spend more money. Remove the comma
apply
For instance
, when you plan to go to the cinema
, you need to pay $15 for each person, unlike when you use
netflix
on your Change the capitalization
Netflix
NetFlix
phone
, you will only pay $12 for the whole month. Furthermore
, not everyone has time to go to the cinema
. It is more convenient for the working people
to use
their phone
especially when they are tired after work, want to relax and decided to watch a movie
In conclusion, watching a film on your phone
is more convenient because you can do it anywhere and anytime. Also
watching on your phone
is cheaper than watching films in cinemas.Submitted by hazelgacayanvidal08 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite