Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to youg people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Life puts
people
in some
situation
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situations
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where it is inevitable to receive different kinds of
advice
from
people
of different
age
group
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groups
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. It is commonly believed that receiving
advice
from
older
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the older
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generation is better than receiving it from
younger
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the younger
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ones. I disagree with
this
statement,
however
, I think receiving
advice
from different
age
group
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groups
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completely depends on the
type
of
advice
and
experience
of
people
on the
subject
.
Firstly
, deciding
of
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whether
an
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advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
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advice
should be received from a younger or an older
person
could depend on the
type
of
advice
.
In other words
, a young
person
may provide
advice
related to his field of expertise, while an older
person
can give from his perspective of expertise.
For instance
, if
someone
want
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wants
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to know about the function of the latest
iphone
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iPhone
12
pro
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pros
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, it would be better to ask a younger
person
.
On the other hand
, if
someone
wants to know about any traditional skills or problems related to work it might be better to ask an older colleague than asking a fresher or new
joinee
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joiner
.
Therefore
, it can be said that taking
an
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advice
a piece of advice
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advice
depends on the
subject
type
.
Secondly
, receiving
advice
also
depend
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depends
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on the
experience
of the
person
in certain fields.
This
means,
age
is just a number if the
person
does not have enough
experience
of the
subject
, his
advice
might not help.
For example
,
someone
is in his 50’s and does not have any kids while
someone
in his 30’s with 3 kids, it would be
better
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a better
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idea to receive
advice
about raising a baby from the
person
with 3 kids even though he is younger.
Thus
, taking
advice
surely depends on the
experience
of the
person
on the specific
subject
. In conclusion, it is always expected that
people
would require receiving
advice
in their life for many things.
This
essay argued that it is not necessary that receiving
advice
from an older
person
is always better than receiving it from the younger counterparts;
however
, it proved that taking
advice
does not depend on the
age
group rather it depends on the
type
of
advice
and
experience
of the
person
on the
subject
.
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