Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subject that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Does advanced community require skilled people in certain areas only ? Few may debate that the
government
should disburse funds to universities for
students
whose
research
is required by
society
.
However
, other
students
who choose less important subjects should not be given
grants
by the
government
.
Although
there are few drawbacks to
such
official
grants
, I believe the advantages certainly outweigh them. The
first
benefit of financial aid is that the
government
can lure
students
for advanced studies as it has been noticed that few areas are sparse in skilled labours.
For example
, In India, we can merely see sewage treatment plants because
students
are least interested in doing
research
on the same.
Government
subsidies on
such
research
would definitely assist in developing talent in desired fields.
Similarly
, multiple programs have been initiated by the
government
in the field of biotechnology as well.
Secondly
, the aforementioned educational policies are
also
focused on the uplift the poor section of
society
. It creates a sense of confidence among talented and needy scholars, which are facing financial problems since childhood because of unemployed parents.
For example
, Dr C.V Raman belonged to a poor family in Kerala and he was able to acquire his degree in space exploration with the help of
grants
by the
government
of India.
Finally
, these monetary schemes create a sense of competition among
students
and benefits both parties.
On the other hand
, disbursing funds for subjects that are the least contributor to
society
creates an unnecessary burden on the
government
's annual budgets. As per the survey conducted by the "Welfare
Society
of India",
Research
shows that 10 million
grants
were spent on history scholars fees.
However
,
such
students
are only learning about the past but not future technologies.
Additionally
, financial
grants
for all
students
weaken the whole idea of competition. To conclude, I would like to reiterate that while educational policy to grant subsidies to few talented
students
only may have some disadvantages, I believe that advantages are far more.
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