Nowadays, the traditions and customs redating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing Why is this happening ? Do you think this kind of change is positive or negative ?
We live in a modern and developed
world
, and people
easily communicate and absorb information from the outside world
. Even food traditions
and customs were absorbed and underwent major changes
. That's not such
a bad phenomenon, it's even richer than the world
's cuisine, but it would be a pity if we only pursue new things
and forget traditional beauty.
As mentioned, the cause of changes
in people
's traditions
and eating styles comes from the absorption of knowledge from the outside world
. People
are interested in new things
and find suitable hobbies, which leads to change. One of the reasons why the change is positive is the greater diversity in cuisine. The harmony of tradition and novelty makes the cuisine increasingly diverse and people
have more choices. From there, the taste will also
develop, and there will be many new changes
to make the dishes
not boring. For example
, instead
of having just a few simple ingredients with the same flavor
, the traditional sweet soup has now been transformed and added with many attractive toppings to satisfy many diners of many different ages. Change the spelling
flavour
Furthermore
, another reason is to popularize the images of traditional dishes
. The change in customs and traditions
of eating to be more suitable for everyone will make it more accessible to everyone, thereby also
making people
know more about food. It can be mentioned that dipping sauces in Vietnam when slightly adjusted in flavor
, can easily be liked by foreign tourists.
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flavour
However
, focusing too much on changing to new things
will lead to the erosion of existing traditions
and customs. Since then
, the true value of ancient dishes
and eating methods has gradually disappeared. Losing traditional values is like losing one's nature. Therefore
, you must know how to be selective and considerate when changing or adding new things
to your eating method. to protect the beauty of traditional style while
still absorbing the new.
In conclusion, having changes
in traditional dishes
and eating methods is a good thing, but you should know when to stop and choose carefully.Submitted by phamnhung275 on
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