More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of technology ,more and more technical talents are needed.

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,many parents want their

children

become

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the

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talent

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in

this

field ,they allow their

children

to

using

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computers and tablets in order to

study

internet ability .

May be

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this

way can help

children

learn more skill about technology ,but in my opinion,

i

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think the good sides is less than bad sides. Nowadays,many

computer

games

are created and attract people to download and play them.The temptation of the game is huge ,and few people can resist them .Few

children

choose to

study

hard when they face

computer

games

.Parents can not always supervise them to learn technology skills.Parents allow

children

using

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a computer

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computer

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computers

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not only will not learn knowledge but

also

provide their

children

`s chance to play

computer

games

. What`s more ,

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whatever

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what ever

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using

computer

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to

study

or play ,it all harm

for

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children

`s eyes.

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learning

computer

skills is

benefit

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for our daily life and even can help us find a high-paid job about

computer

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the computer

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,it

depends

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different

kind

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of

children

.If a child is interested in computers and

want

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study

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to study

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computers,it is

benefits

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.

However

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if a child just

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wants

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want

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play

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computer

games

,

this

decision is

disadvantage

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a disadvantage

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for

children

.Actually whatever if the

children

is

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using a

computer

to learn or play ,a long time to use the

computer

is harmful to the

study

. Comparing

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results,

i

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think the disadvantage about

allow

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children

using

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to use

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a computer

the computer

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computer

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computers

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is overweight the advantage.Learning knowledge have many ways ,it

not

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have to operate on a

computer

.