More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of technology ,more and more technical talents are needed.

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field ,they allow their

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computers and tablets in order to

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internet ability .

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way can help

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learn more skill about technology ,but in my opinion,

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think the good sides is less than bad sides. Nowadays,many

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are created and attract people to download and play them.The temptation of the game is huge ,and few people can resist them .Few

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choose to

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hard when they face

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.Parents can not always supervise them to learn technology skills.Parents allow

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computer

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not only will not learn knowledge but

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provide their

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learning

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skills is

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for our daily life and even can help us find a high-paid job about

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of

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.If a child is interested in computers and

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if a child just

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play

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for

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using a

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is harmful to the

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results,

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think the disadvantage about

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children

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a computer

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computer

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is overweight the advantage.Learning knowledge have many ways ,it

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have to operate on a

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