In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
It is a discussable concern that a lot of highly qualified
graduates
can’t get a job
in some countries. There are innumerable and different reasons for every nation, particularly the developing countries this
situation is still worse than the wealthy countries. I will explain the actual job
getting problems to face good graduates
in my country.
Firstly
, in Mongolia, the progress of the HR field in our country has just begun to develop into the world’s standards recently. It seems that there isn’t any efficient, usable and holistic human resource system that can interconnect between employees and employers. Thus
, now the real situation in looking for a job
is that most graduates
search for work through their relatives and friends. It is mean that if you haven’t a good network and relatives, you couldn’t get a job
with a high salary and good prospects. For instance
, in my case, before my friend assisted to contact me to my current employer, I had got a job
through my parents’ friend.
Secondly
, universities in Mongolia don’t assist students in the job
-hunting process. Graduates
have to find a suitable company or employers by themselves because job
proposals aren’t almost delivered to students before their graduation due to the fact that their universities don’t inform and propose them to employers. Therefore
, I think educational organizations should increase their role in job
searching. For instance
, it can help to start early the process of job
-searching. As early starting it, learners can expand job
selections and they are able to find their dream work. It is a potential way to drop the number of unemployed highly graduated students.
To conclude, improvements in the HR sector are a necessary thing for good graduates
who are looking for work and supports from colleges as well as universities will be crucial for early starting job
-hunting processes.Submitted by mgl2666 on
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