Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. Why do you think is so ? What parents can do to avoid this situation declining further.

Nowadays, numerous youngsters are more addicted to digital platforms throughout dawn and dusk.Eventually, the craze for mobile
applications
is more increasing than in the previous decade.And in a
further
,essay I will be discussing my views and opinions.
First
of all, reasons for the habitual about excessively using mobile
applications
, as
parents
are more focusing on their schedule rather than keeping eyes on
children
’s health
that is
eyesight. Another problem is popping up, as many digital games attract the minds of the
children
such
as pubg, candy crush, and many more.
For instance
, about a few years ago, the ratio of social platforms and todays are more likely increasing among the new youths. And
hence
, the use of mobile
applications
is continuously rising in the daily routine. And
therefore
,
children
's routine is fully made of technology. On the
second
hand, to avoid the situation,
parents
should restrict the belonging time of mobile
applications
. As many apps are available for entertainment, social, news and
hence
the conversation of time are more and more chances to damaging eyesight. Mobile games have covered more proportion than outdoor games and
hence
,
parents
would spare some time for
further
improvement.
However
, there should be particular age of entering into social media and watching movies, series which should decide by the
parents
. To conclude, every coin has two sides similar to which, there are two sides to the usage of
applications
. But in my opinion,
parents
play a major role in
children
's future ,not in
children
's unnecessary demands of phones usage. After that, the habits of youngsters can be break by following precautions.
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