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All students should study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As they say,
Music
 and
art
 are the
soul
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 of life. From the chirping of birds in the morning to walls with mesmerising paintings ,
art
 and
music
 are etched
to
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 our daily routine. Something so intricate
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thus
 requires our special effort and attention to get inculcated in the lives of our students. Religiously speaking, the chanting of prayers and the different patterns made on the floor are not only
asethetic
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aesthetic
 to watch but
also
 an important landmark of our culture.
Secondaly
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Secondly
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 ,
art
 and
music
 have been a
contant
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constant
content
 employer since
ancient
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 era. From the era of
classical
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musical
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 to now hip hop , from kathak to salsa and from patterns on the floors to the beautiful paintings on the walls , we have witnessed changing trends but what has remain
contant
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content
constant
 is the value and pride of the artist.
Art
 and
music
 have
also
 endowed
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 with scientific knowledge . The intricacies of architecture, the power of sound energy and the use of patterns and postures have given a new vision to the human mind.
Besides
 its role in our health and lifestyle ranging from morning meditation to exercise and busting stress cannot be forgotten.
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, teaching students
art
 and
music
 will give them a more fulfilling life and additional skills to ponder
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