Some believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends upon student’s attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant example

The academic performance of a student is a complex phenomenon with a host of factors. A segment of society is convinced that whether
students
succeed academically or not fully depends on a
teacher
. Others,
however
, believe that
students
' attitudes to
lessons
play a more important role.
Although
teachers
play an important role in ensuring academic success, I believe that
students
' attitude is decisive. To commence, undoubtedly,
teachers
should have certain skills and knowledge in order to impart the information to learners.
In other words
, an intelligent
teacher
should know how to provide
lessons
in a way so that all children in a class with different academic performances understood the topic.
For instance
,
teachers
can provide
lessons
combining different teaching methods to make sure that
students
understood the topic. Without a specific approach to conducting
lessons
, and sufficient knowledge, pupils may get confused, or get the wrong information,
this
, in turn, may reflect on their academic performance.
However
, pupils' attitude towards
lessons
is more important when it comes to studying well. In a class with 40 juveniles, all pupils have different performances, even though they all have the same
teacher
. Obviously,
this
is because all of them have different approaches to their
lessons
. In order to succeed academically, learners,
for example
, should do their homework in a timely manner, be disciplined and put extra effort to study more.
In contrast
, some
students
do not want to study even though they are pushed by their
teachers
. To conclude, having discussed both arguments, I believe that mentorship provided by
teachers
is certainly important.
Nonetheless
, children cannot study well only because their
teacher
is good. Academic success mainly depends upon learners' attitudes.
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