Being a celebrity– such as a film star or singer – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

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In the age of change, the career path of famous celebrities is quite clear,
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however
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some people
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avoid
public attention, the others thrive for it. Those who
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fame and attention do not care much about the
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inconvenience
that it might bring, the others afraid of change and its negative aspects. I support the idea that being a public
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has uncountable benefits and in
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I will discuss some of them. On the
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hand, in order to become a celebrity, one must work hard, shape perfect skills and be patient. The path is not quite easy, but if you are already well known it means that you, as a person, are perfect in your field. Of course, not everyone can be a celebrity as being
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, accepting failures and defining the exact targets are the core values that define a true professional, and if a person is known that means he already masters
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skillset. As an example, I would like to tell
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my friend who wanted to become a movie star. During our school years, he was
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excellent
at all the classes and never missed or skipped any
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performance. He often repeated that only
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and
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people can succeed. Now, he has become the most demanded actor in Armenia and it is a pleasure to see his play. I clearly remember his recent tweet about
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as he mentioned that he has reached
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his
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goals and he feels fully satisfied.
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, celebrities have lots of resources and
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. They are considered
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, meaning Very important persons. When thinking about them and their
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I always remember Meghan Trainor's song where she was telling how blessed is she and that "she never pays for her dreams". I concur that problems are not big issues unless we think they are. So if anyone thinks he does not deserve to be known, probably he is right. Of
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there are other examples of people,
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as the "Backstreet
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" group, who ended up their career just to be as normal as others. To me being ordinary means having many problems and not enjoying
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life
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fully. To sum up, I would like to mention again that I support the idea of being famous as I believe it is very profitable. Being the
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toughest
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thing ever, it brings
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benefits that are worthy to fight for. I hope one day I will be perfect enough to become a celebrity in my field.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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