Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming ? And what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

In today's era, the
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threating
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threatening
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most is increasing temperature.
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pollution
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plastic
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reason
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behind it , In order to handle
this
issue
multiple steps can be taken , which I will discuss in forthcoming paragraphs. The main reason strike to my mind is that
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pollution
is increasing day by day
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because every person prefer to travel by their own vehicle
instead
of public Transportation which create more air and noise
pollution
then
leads to enhance global temperature.
Moreover
, excessive usage of
plastic
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fills up our land sites and when burnt its fumes into
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,which destroy the environment and
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for global warming.
Also
, utilization of chemicals
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reason
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for it. Moving toward
solution
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a solution
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,
government
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the government
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needs to tackle
this
problem very carefully. Primarily,
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government
should encourage people to
use
public transport rather than personal, so that
pollution
level
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can be controlled. If
pollution
level becomes controlled
then
issue
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the issue
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of global warming
also
will be solved. Secondarily, authorities should
bann
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ban
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plastic
use
,
plastic
should be restricted in all forms
such
as carry bags, straws.
For instance
, In Netherland,
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banned
use
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of
plastic
, global warming declined
upto
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up to
to
80%.
Also
, it is the responsibility of every person on the earth
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keep
environment
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neat and clean, so that global warming can be avoided. People should support to
government
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the government
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to tackle
this
issue
. In conclusion,
although
,
pollution
and utilization of
plastic
are cause for global warming; it can be tackled with individuals as well as
government
efforts and by making strict rules.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global issue
  • severity
  • urgency
  • greenhouse effect
  • human-induced
  • deforestation
  • fossil fuel combustion
  • industrial pollution
  • environmental regulations
  • emission standards
  • renewable energy sources
  • green technologies
  • international cooperation
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • energy consumption
  • public transportation
  • recycling
  • eco-friendly
  • extreme weather conditions
  • biodiversity
  • economic stability
  • collective responsibility
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